成都新航道培训学校是一家专业的雅思托福留学培训机构，针对想要出国留学的学员提供有雅思培训，托福培训，托业英语，sat，GMAT，GRE等课程，集训班，寒暑假班，周末班 ，一对一辅导班任意选择，详情可咨询400-6062-502 不知各位烤鸭们在写作文的时候是否有这样的感觉： 好不容易写完作文后，觉得自己写的实在太 low，不忍阅读，但也不知如何修改？ 然后读完考官范文之后，有时不知好在哪里，有时又觉得写的太好，自己只能“望而却步”？ 事实上，在写作备考过程中，写作范文是非常重要的参考资料，而剑桥雅思真题中给我们提供的考官范文又是我们心中较放心的文章，在C4-C14 这11本书中，有关Task 2 的文章仅仅只有15篇，数量十分之少，那就更需要我们去充分利用，下面我们就来结合C8T1这篇文章来分步讲解一下如何读懂并运用考官范文来提高写作水平。 01 仔细审题 列出提纲 题干如下： Some people think parents should teach children how to be good members of society, while others believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 这是一道非常典型的双边讨论题目，那么我们准确审题之后，可以先对题目进行一下简单构思并尝试写出大纲，比如： 开头—引出话题： 家长和学校谁来负责教育孩子成为好的社会成员； 主体1—讨论观点1： 家长对孩子的启蒙影响。 主体2–讨论观点2： 学校能提供更专业的教育。 结尾—总结并表明个人立场。（可以二者选其一，也可以二者合作教育） 02 通读范文 梳理文章思路 在我们自己对题目有了一定的思路和分析之后，带着自己的想法先通读一遍范文，分析其中的逻辑结构，列出范文提纲与自己的版本进行对比，范文如下： A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone. In order to be a good member of any society the individual must respect and obey the rules of their community and share their values. Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents. They will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world. However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home. Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. This experience should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community. But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill. It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.
成都新航道英语培训学校
